思辨绘本/青少英语
任选一门*1课时
主题语境:生活态度 语篇类型:童话 难度:
关键词:lovers 短文词数:360 建议时间:20分钟
阅读下面的短文,根据情节继写,使其形成一个完整的故事。
There was once a beautiful town in which there were a couple of lovers who would often stay together on the top of the mountain enjoying the sunrise and by the sea appreciating the sunset. Everyone who knew them could not help envying them and praying for their happy love.
But one day, the man was severely injured and lying in bed in hospital for several days without any consciousness.The woman guarded him by the bed in daytime, calling his name constantly while at night,she would go to the church and pray to God until her tears rolled down her face.
A week passed by and the man was still sleeping. The woman was exhausted, but she still persisted. One day, God was finally moved by her love and persistence and would like to do her a special favor.
God asked her,"Do you really want to exchange your lover's life with yours? The woman answered without the least hesitation, “Yes." God said, "All right. I can
help your lover recover quickly on the condition that you should promise to be a butterfly for three years. Do you agree with the deal? She said excitedly and firmly, "Yes, I do!"
The next day, the woman became a beautiful butterfly and said goodbye to God, flying hurriedly to the hospital. It turned out that the man came to his consciousness and woke up, talking with a doctor. She could not hear what they were talking about because she could not fly into the house. What she could do was watch her beloved through the windows helplessly.
After several days, the man entirely recovered and went out of hospital. However, he was unhappy and asking every passer-by for the woman's information, but no one knew where the woman went. The man searched her persistently without eating or resting. So much did he miss her that he was eager to see her immediately. Never did he know that the woman had turn into a butterfly that was flying around him all the time. She could not speak to and hug him. She could only bear the suffering that he did not realize her existence.
注意:
1.写短文的词数应为150上下;
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词:
3.继写部分分为两段,每段的开头已经为你写好;
Paragraph 1:
After summer was over,the autumn came.
Paragraph 2:
The butterfly felt heartbroken.
写作引导
童话短文:完整版童话——《海的女儿》,结合主题爱情和牺牲联想
理由:情节同样是女主为男角牺牲,主角无法对话。
参考:1.情节推进,延续发展可以参考,通过女主角勇于奉献,愿意牺牲来提升主题。
2. 情景转换,让故事系统化。《海的女儿》写的是海边和宫殿,这篇文章可以参考海边和教堂。
提醒:有些选词造句可以从上面的红线中整理提取。通过划线部分句子,继写部分与前面文本的情节相关性和风格是一致的。
Paragraph 1:
After summer was over,the autumn came.The man missed his lover very much. He insisted going to the top of the mountain and the seaside alone every other day,recalling the happy time they had enjoyed together. It became colder and colder.The butterfly had to leave.She flew around the man again and again.She could not say goodbye to him and he knew nothing about her sacrafice.
When spring came again,the butterfly flew back to look for her lover.Finally,She found him on the beach one morning.However,there was a beautiful woman sitting beside him.He held her, smiling.
Paragraph 2:
The butterfly felt heartbroken.She couldn’t believe her eyes.She flew to him and stayed on his shoulder.She wanted to tell him what she had done for him.But she could not say anything.The man enjoyed the happy time with his new lover and didn’t even notice the butterfly.
The butterfly flew to the church and prayed to God.God asked her:”What can I do for you this time?””I..”she sobbed.After a long silence,she shook her head and flew away lonely.She thought:”I made a deal to exchange my life for him.I want him to be happy.Now he is happy.That’s enough.”
思辨绘本/青少英语
任选一门*1课时